Your straight dude the only thing is your not formatted to this fake ass internet "text battling". If you got rythem and a unique style (the way YOU rap). You can MC, well, it's up to you how bad you wanna get.
As for This text BS, disreguard it, it will only fuck you up. Cause rappin is an audio thing, people hear you and say yeah, this text shit is a farse. In order to "elevate", you have to conform to their understandings, of mute rap. SO....you can either choose to be good at this worthless bullshit, and forsake your rythem and common sense, or try to be like these punks, and forget the basics of hip hop (originality & expression) altogether for this cheap mockery...

When I read your rhyme I was on beat and understood everything! These people want you to throw 20 extra words in it, and use big words, gay references, and oh yeah make it funny.

Oh yeah another way to elevate is to get 5 homeys, and have them vote for you, no matter what......that's what they do....