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Old 07-25-03, 06:01 PM   #24
bouncedoggydog
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Well this was not the cleanest battle, but it was not bad either.

Wallbanger, had some punches, nothting devistaing though. His flow was good, could have been better. No complexity, not much if any word play, nothing significant.

Ambigous, had some hardder punches, but dawg they are right, shit was abused in the past. one thing that set your verse apart was the vocan and that name flip. That in my eye's put you over the top, multi's were there but not complex. Had you not used the word play in the name dis, I would have a hard time giving you a vote.

overall, I think both of you could elevate, and big, tighten up your lines, they are a little runny, and freshen up your punches. They are recycled to some degree.


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