hmm...both you of you came weaker than i am accustomed to seeing..
Look At This Kid..He Wanted To Be Cam..But This Idoit Didn't Spell The Name Write..
Make Sure You Aim Right..Cause You Missing Points Like Playen Games At Night..
^no. too newbish...
Ya Flames Aint Bright..Bitch..You Getting Balls In Ya..Wheather Its Head R Tales..
Driving Fast Past Mail Man Trucks ..Only Way You'll Be Ahead Of The Males..
^this was ok i guess...couldve been better.
In The Bed Ya Dwell..Sleeping On Dictionaries..Just To Keep Wordz At Thought..
This Kid Get Schooled..Cause You Slowly Out Numbered Like Retards Who Taught..
^what? i reread that multiple times...the set up was ok but this wasnt really even a punch.
Ya Barz Get Caught..Ima Inspector So Dont Even Be Bringing Weak Bars At All..
..Cause Like Tornadoes..Hitting Ya Late Night Spots..Ya Bars Dont Stand At All..
^no. dont rhyme the same word twice...
Im Big You Small..Like Church Woman Flirting With Ya..You Cum Get Nun..
Old Boy Get Gunned..Cause This Nicca Wouldnt Have Hot Lines If He Song
Oh Boy In The Sun
^had potential but it was too long and the wording was off..
Cameron
This cat's playin me like i'm famillier, who is this ho?Violent Words?
I got tons of fam-iller, sad thing is...... I'm riding solo. Time to silence this herb
^sick opener..
This cat plays with G.I. Joe's on his bed to get some action in his sheets (action figures)
Cuz you couldn't "bag a chicken-head" if you got take-out at KFC
^decent
You're a fag Ya second bar's like a used videogame, already played!
Only reason you ahead of the pack is cuz u the mascot at the gay parade!
^no.
Me an you's havin a "fall-out" like extra small tampons, that you can bet on.
His bf uses his vinly pants as a pillow so Wordz says "my threads keep gettin slept on!"
^no.
Fuck all bars I already won this wager Wordz can't touch a bar like underage teenagers
Cameron got sick spits, the results be tragic, Wordz tried to kick shit, but he got his ass kicked
^^eh...average i guess..
bottom line. you two both have potential and Cameron seems to grasp this whole battling thing more...but, if you two keep at it you could be two of the best someday..
Wordz.. work on adding personals to your verse..
Cameron..same thing..you have alot of potential...make sure you come hard all the time though..
vote= Cameron..
return the favor and drop and honest vote over here..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67685
....and that....is word.