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Old 07-25-03, 06:08 PM   #2
BulletPrewf
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Iight Homie, I Aint Hatin Or nOthin Cuz I Dont Even Fuckin Know You But Peep...Ya Linez Waz Too Simple -N- Shit On Tha Real, And Some Linez Was Real Short And Others Ran On -N- On...Try -N- Make Ya Linez About The Same Length And Not So Run On So That Way Tha Flow Is There Nah Mean?? Try Throwin In Some Multiz, Metaz, And Punchlinez, And Shit Like That 2...Get Creative Wit Some Shit...If You Need Any Help Send Me A Message Or AIM Me At...

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