Oh my satanic thoughts of babylon!! She threw herself off the cliff into the water below!! With a rock tied to her feet?!

I liked this. It was quite sharp, yet flowed fairly well. The overall meaning of the piece was there to get. Yet it wasn't obvious. It was dug a bit. I must admit, i am a bit confused to how exactly it was you killed yourself.

Did you jump off a cliff and onto the shallow waters below? Then the tide slowly dragged you in whilst you were drowning?

Or were you dragged in whilst swimming or walking? Or even accidently fell in?

Sorry, i'm a bit blocked up at present. So not thinking completely straight. But i got the jist of it for sure.

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