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Old 07-25-03, 08:11 PM   #4
cameronj86
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Lemme break it down
Dez
the Executives are sick..well at least you were for half a day...
when G. Hod left he played Dr...and took all your illness away...

^Nice opener, personals off the bat^

startin a new Crusade and killin all non-believers call me King Rich...
we all think youre wack.. youre not 'Da Illest' just cause you KO'ed a Corrupt Lyricist...

^Uh didn;t read the bible but i assume its in there^

crew got ripped... yall are the laughing stock of RB,
clowned by G. Hod, Sureal, Sand...like the Vietnam Memorial the names go on endlessly....

^A lil stretched, but nice^

i got this battle easily.. like the Coalition in Iraq the victor was clear at the start...
only a matter of time.. shuttin yall down quicker than post-bankrupt KMART...

^lol, forgot about Kmart^

you act hard...but like drug dealers plea-bargaining you quickly show your true colors...
old news..throwin you away like yesterdays paper cause youre useless...like holy rubbers
^spelled holey wrong i think, alright closer, nothing special^



Young Mik
Half ya lines missed me,the other half contened but u pulled em back cuz it was risky//
MY verse disconected ya dome..leavin u headless, when i abuse my lyrical tactics//
never endless,i spit heat so rapid like im shottin out my auto-matics//

Nice opener (the firt line anyway) then you go str8 in2 the bragfest

leavin u hezitent, cuz u no you wanna of my fanactics,,but i unravled that, ya death is near//
ya flows stumble an drop,when u feel fire from ya daddy doin u up the rear//

^NO punches here, i think you put "wanna" instead of "one"

Now ya names dez I er. cuz when ya hear spittin u run in fear//
slut only swallow,or drop when its bitin, cuz u all DIk rydin u fukin queer//

^The first line makes no sense, does Dez I er mean run away in a dif language or something?^

u fall ow ya crew around,when battles come up u alwayz found hidin in da ditches//
u fuked wut the wrong emcee catch a dome shot an find ya self sleepin wit da fishes//
I SPLUTER An spill flows cursed wit da kill,when ya get ripped at da seams of da stiches//

^More bragging, no punches^

ya wish is mY command a qUick merk wit my verse 2 wanna of my biggest fans,then end Up killed//
u no ya flows an rhymes remind me of myself when i wasnt this ILL//
be foreal u no im ya idol,an see ya ass clonein my skillz when i flash da skill to minors//
this battle ends up final,wit a another loss for u ,but i got a feelin ull still stay in denail.........just cry ho...everylines an flow hides a joke,..

^Nothing special no punches, coulda been at anyone^

Dez got this one
Edit: lol, all that and it won't let me vote