I thought both rhymes were pretty weak. There were good punches here and there especially from Jack but the flows just didnt match up. If you guys changed one thing right away you should make it your structure. Dont just run your flows onto another line, try to add some structure. Take a look at some of the vets battles if you dont know what I mean. When I vote I read the battles out loud..... yours is just cluttered and theres not breaks..... if i read it to a beat it would be.... well you get the picture.....

anyways not hatin just tryna help you guys out.... buy anyways Jack is gettin my vote he had more punches....