Basic Rhyme Scheme Through And Through But
You Provided Us With A Decent Delivery...

The Second Stanza Was a Lot Better Than
Your First One..Thats Right I Said Stanza...

Shiznit Shoulda Said Something Rather Than Nothing At
All..Can I Be A Moderator ~Me be Here Long Time~

Overall This Was A Decent Piece Of Work
..Please Be Respctful And Reply To My Latest
Or Anyone Else Who Has Shown Interest In Your Work

Peace

~Content~

Con-tent..Say It With Me..I Know You Can