thinkin about u makes my chest hurt & makes me think sad

~talents there but speak engish dammit~

you used me as if i were a living soul dart board

~a tad of imagery for a choppy flow~

my heart was the red in the middle & u hit me with every shot

~all of our hearts are red but I feel what your saying~

the next shot you hear was me. killing myself while lookin in a mirror with your picture

~your talented and the flows there but it lacks imagery and you
need to cop an english book whenever you have some free time~

or listen to eyedea cause hes from Minnesota

something must be wrong I typed without caps

Please Be Respectable And Reply To Me And
Anyone Else Who Has Shown Interest In Your Work

Peace

~Content~ Con-tent

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