kinda simple but its okay, with practice ya vocab you use in ya rhymes will naturally grow. work on the ending of ya songs. its always important to go out with a bang. keep postin and doing ya thing. PEACE

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""Accustomed to trample on the rights of others, you have lost the genius of your own independence and become the fit subjects of the first cunning tyrant who rises among you." --Abraham Lincoln, speech, September 11, 1858