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Originally posted by Dezyir
This is dedicated to Hottie...lol..id told you id do it....
59 wins by Battlin nothing but newbs. . . Brooklyn mustnt have any poise . . .
only mods vote?! shits about to get flipped on ya..like priests gettin molested by little boys..
played...but good..^ 2/5
no choice..you were forced into this battle..now youre in Jeopardy like Trebek..
no newbie army...so now youre defenseless as fuck . . .like monks in Tibet . .
ive never heard it and i like it..^ 3/5
get much respect from noobs but you dare not come lookin to vets. . .
if you can SSSSTTRRREEETCCCCHHH a dollar like a bar youll never be in debt...
no.^ 2/5
G-Unit reject..modern day Andy Dick the way you only battle the weak..
how do you consider yourself a vet when you still have a scrolling marquee?..
tightest bar from either of u. ^ 4/5
dont flee...have some honor and at least take this loss like a man...
bottom line..like sugarless Kool-Aid your rhymes arnt spectacular..but merely bland
2/5
this line was bad...punch was bad and it didnt rhyme...suggested change...
like a man dont rhyme with merely bland...should be "the type thats bland"
you know you love it
......and that.....is word.
total...13/20...i am raising it to 26/40 (same fraction and percentage) cuz brookyln has more barz...
corrected *only *....it was owns....
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Originally posted by BROOKLYN
THAT JEOPARDY LINE CAME FROM A NAS DISS FROM OSKENO IN ROC A FELLA OR MAYBE IT WAS A COINCIDENCE BUT WHATEVA..LETS GO..
Your 3rd Loss Was Personal, 'Stabbed Your Statements' So I Guess Your 'Irrelevance Was Hurtin-You'/
the phrase "irrelevance was hurtin you" sounded gay..loss of points...lol... 1/8
Your Curfew From Our Last Battle Was A 'No Show' Cus You Were Scared When The 'Curtains-Flew'/ didnt like it...ya rhymin is off...2/8
This-Dames-Tight? Only 'Scores' When Opponents Fail To Spit-Game-Right/ tight... 5/8
His-Brains-Light, Dezyir Can't Be On My Level, Too Dumb To Spell His-Name-Right/ ok....wasnt ne thing special....2/8
Hits-Bang-Nice, With 'Great-Steaks' He Brings 'Prime Beef' That Will 'Stay-Ate'/ 5/8...liked this one
I Spray-Dates, Don't Ever Got The Time For 'Faggits' So Im'a Set This 'Gay-Straight'/ lol....6/8
Punches Serve You 'Quick' Like 'Fast Food', Kid The Mood-Is-Groovy/ dont ever say the word groovy in my presence again. lol...3/8
This Dudes-A-Groupie Claim Veteran But In A Group-With-Newbies/ tight. 4/8
Droundin-Fool, Need A Boost Of Elevation First For You To Ever Escape-My-Spits/
filler...2/8
Gets-Raped-By-Hits, Even If 'Dope Tutored' You, You Still Couldn't 'Elevate-High-Quick'/
screwed up the rhyme...in my opnion bad closer. 3/8
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screw this system but it seems to have worked at least in some respects...i thought brookyln won and thats what it came out as, altho i must did some math wrong cuz the scores were so far apart....
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