Thread: Eternal Flower
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Old 07-26-03, 03:42 PM   #2
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adjacent* good vocab so far though

My love filled you deeply...
like all these grains of sand
With tide sprinkles memories
that roar across this land

*A Tad Of Imagery....Not Bad


Frail fingers exposed to the sun
Petels inravel in my hands
A piece of me forgotten
A slice of this lonely man

*Flowed Better Than Everything Else

All In All This Was Nice And Meaningful
And Could Be Better With More Imagery
To Your Story....Decent Piece

Please Be Respectful And Reply To Those
Who Decide to Show Interest In Your Flows

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