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Old 07-26-03, 06:16 PM   #7
whitelightning
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holy fuckin shit...that was some of the tightest shit I have ever read....Here is the break down...

Phranktik....
I'll be watching you. .
from the clouds, watching your every step.
This isnt goodbye. .
just remember that "true love never dies. ."
So were not finished. .
just scheduled to be at another place & time.
I'll really miss you. .

That was some tight fuckin shit man...it got me....been in a spot where I had friend die of menijitis...so I kinda grip ya....Phat verse through and through. It was less aggressive compared to Sureal....

Sureal...
Walking Down The Road Of Life..
All The Hardships And The Strife..
Dealing With The Insecurities..
And All Of Lifes Impurities..

Absolute phat opener...kept me interested into reading the whole thing...Phrantik...that just didn't go for me

This was the clincher...
Right There The Ache UnBearable..
Nothing Doing, Heart UnRepairable..
Boyfriend Came In, Grabbed The Gun..
Tried To Shoot, The Unloaded One..
Grabbed My Knife, Peirced His Skin..
Sliced His Throat, Chest To Chin..

The imagery when I read it was fuckin money..that's what it's about...That is the verse that decided it....

Vote: Sureal

This is a money battle....legend? possibly...
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