my god... this was....wow. from both sides. just amazing. both of you showed me why you got this far...

Sureal- Loved the story, stayed on topic, nice flow, excellent use of vocab .....overall i think its one fo the best that you have done..

Phrantik-i also loved your story..it was emotional and heart-felt.. where you lacked in flow and structure the story made up for in how deep and emotional it was...

my eyes actually started to water when i read Phrantiks verse...
Sureal if you wouldve gone against anybody else i think that you wouldve got it..i actually came into this thinkin that you were gonna wipe the floor with him...but damn...this was close but i have to give it to Phrantik

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both of you are mods...please hit this up..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68263