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Old 07-26-03, 07:49 PM   #6
Caramac
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Blah. .

Dezyir came ok, a couple nice lines, opener was nice, good personal about Brooklyn's style, follow up was ok, Visions line was pretty original, lmao at 'was kinda ill. .till you dropped!' that was good, dieing breed line could of been worded better but not bad. .

Soldier...your opener was a little weird, the bar seemed stretched to far, threw me on the flow, multi's were a little forced too, punch wasnt too strong for an opener, heat rises was a good concept, could of been worded a lot better though, goat line is played, has been since LL Cool J dropped that album of his, lol, multi's were ok in the set up line though, next bar was stretetched too far, flow was off, punch was kinda weak IMO, petty theft line was aight, prolly the best in your verse actually. .

Vote: Dezyir

Ehhh, he had less played lines, and a couple standouts, the personal was pretty effective, i wasnt feeling Soldiers verse apart from his finisher, his verse seemed keyed up to me. Dezyir was just more consistant so i voted for him. Nice battle. .
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