Elevating Beyond Perfect
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IP:
this was really close, i thought both were great, but heres the lay-out, i aint gonna get into a big explanation so ill amek it short and to the point
imagery-sureal
vocab-sureal
style-tik
creativity-tik
flo-sureal
overall....sureal
ok, both verses were great, they both stayed on topic but tik lacked flo, although his piece lacked flo, it came with great emotion and was a great piece, sureal had it all as always, the vocab the flo the imagery everything, so im gonna have to give it to sureal, both were very well done and i wish you both luck in the phuture but this time sureal took it
vote-sureal
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