ok props to both this is what it should b about.......

very good approach to the topic from both even though it was different with each.......

Sureal..good everything.cant complain here can crtique it either,,,u told the story it came across and with that u added flow vocab and imagery...

TiK...the same as above but i did have one complain wich is what made me choose the vote.....i couldnt flow well with your piece i beleive your story was a little stronger than surelas but it was just very hard to follow...

so to that my vote goes to...

vote=SuReaL

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