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Sureal.... I cought on to that shit right away with the not knowin dudes name an shit,
The entire story was dope, a little gayish with the diary thing, but still came nice with tha
flow scheme and the picture painting an shit...
Phrantik.... I liked yours too, kinda sappy, come to think of it you both came sappy...awww...
but anyways cancer victim with tha last words and a confession of love, and hope for the
afterlife....But your rhyme scheme killed you in this one, jus didnt seem to work out as well
Vote-Sureal
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