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Old 07-27-03, 09:54 AM   #9
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just like the "rectum", your "shit" is "behind" my Stardom, Thug Whyte's just a "dick", but difference is, when he sees "pussy", he doesn't get "Hardened"//1
Execellent OPENER, nice analogy
just like a "virgins minge" you hurt and cringe cos my style is "very Tight", i agree bitch, you are "below" the "average" stereo type,(check his sig)//2
TIGHT SHIY
congratulations on your hektik record, thats wot u get for battlin newb's, i've "lost" my temper on you now bitch, imma make sure you "lose"//3
This verse needs word...Its a personal, but didnt hit hard
i discharge hits like an out of control magnum spraying-bullets, only i aim on target just like my cum does when im pleasin you mother to the fullest//4
A little played wit basic words, but nice analogy
why the fuck have you called yourselves elements elite to gain respect, you aint foolin no-one bitch, even if we were all wrecked//5
This is kind of weak
anyone can text there shit but have you ever held a mic?, its sweet gettin peeps to help you on battles, cos we know you can't read or write//6
this is a so-so verse
wanting me to ride with the elements, shit, i'd rather be with s club, i know why you battled me its so you could get my shit easier seen as your a "Fiori memorabilia" collecter//7
cool verse
you votin for dw but he's in da same crew as you are?, yo, that shit is what we call dick rider, u gonna get barred//8
excellent hit, excellent personal
ha ha, what a pussy, i've more meat in peas that are mushy, claimin that your gonna merk me dead, dawg, don't push me!!!!//9
JUST A FILLER LINE
beat fiori? nah, don't think so, your goin to "jail" cos i'm so dope, thing is, that'd be helpin you cos dw told me that you love to "drop the soap"//10
Played out line
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England? .. travels europe, kills jews for sports.. a Nazi of Sorts..Embarressing amount of torque, cuttin you into four-fourths tha way he Beats-Kids//
Excellent opening as well. Good multies wit ryhming
Hes Compete-Less.. knockin him wit punches teeth-less.. get him ~pissed~ like fraternity Toilet Seat Lids//
DAM...GOOD as wordplay and use of multies
N.Y.G... Lost count of how many i merked.. Lets just say i left ~Plenty-Stranded~.. Battled ya'll so much, im on tha Invitation-List//
seems ta be just a filler[/]
Gave tha mic to you, put up tha merkin and left you ~Empty-Handed~.. thanks for tha offer but ure Sindications-Missed//
[b]???

..: ~Delivery~ :..

Stomped him rounded.. like cylindrical criminals' grounded.. He's just part of tha crowd crowded.. as soon as he found-shit he Impounds-It//
DAM--This hit hard as hell wit good use of words and multies
Brown-nosin Brown-script.. your text is about as bad as your audios.. just check his Soundclick//
nice outro from the last verse and flow from one verse to another

You Nice? Nice enough to get sliced, out priced.. kids' so repetitive he has tha same guy in his signature Twice//
DAM---Excellent personal and hits in this verse
Jesus Christ, did you just read-this-right? Bet your mic that if you got payed to be wack.. you'd be Set-For-Life//
Nice use of MULTIES

..: Time to End this Bitch :..

Losin = Quick Cash.. you aint on my level, you need a Lift-Pass, agreedthat me n you are a definite mix-match, you took tha Missed-Path//
DAM--Multies combined wit wordplay again
I've leavin you outta Hab-It-Tat.. off tha niche-pad.. you tryin to win against me? How Said-is-that?.. Just here to "Grind" Fiori's Bitch-Ass//
okay finisher



BOTTOM LINE---
Both of yall had EXCELLENT openings. FIORI, your shit is sick but it didnt rhyme. Ya worked so hard on the wordplay that ya forgot about the flow....

I VOTE THUG WHITE cause he maintained a flow with great wordplay and multies that keep me saying DAM....