Before i go into anything... major props to both...

Sureal:
Great shit, as usual from you... Some times i lost interest in it, but then i got caught right back into it

Favorite Lines:
This was the clincher...
Right There The Ache UnBearable..
Nothing Doing, Heart UnRepairable..
Boyfriend Came In, Grabbed The Gun..
Tried To Shoot, The Unloaded One..
Grabbed My Knife, Peirced His Skin..
Sliced His Throat, Chest To Chin..

~Imagery was amazingly appealing here.. felt every word

OveralL - Stayed on Topic.. flowed well, and was felt to tha fullest

Phrantik:
Wow.. amazing shit bro... Taken to tha heart bro .. Flow was a lil off but tha story made up for it

Favorite Lines:

this cancer seed may hold the answers i need
Its made me see. .
how much you and my family actually mean to me.
This may be. .
my final breath, my hearts slowing, if ur still here
Then listen close.. .
i'll own up now, ive never really expressed how i feel...

wow.. speechless man.. makes you think, wonder, feel depressed, and hopeful all at tha same time.. great piece

OveralL - Flow was a lil off.. The topic was great, you stayed on it to the last line.. you put all tha emotion into what topic are suppose to be

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