Rhyming/Flow
The Flow Was Of Da Chain Dawg! You Had Mad Multi's IN there, Not one Bar Didn't Rhyme With Last Or the One In Front! ...9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
The VOcab Was Lacking, It COuld've Been More Complex BUt Your Wordplay Was Mad As Fuck Dawg, "I Hear The Rain, The Tears Begin To Fall..." - More Like That...7/10

Concept/Topic
Didn't Fall Off, I Was Feelin' You Dawg. You Succeded In Showing Us Your Meaning n' Bring Out The Emotion in This Piece...9/10

Overall
9/10 - Expanded Vocab Was The ONly Thing Lacking, But Your Succeded IN Everything Else, Was Brutal Dawg!

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