nigga dont you know keesy kee can make your life a living hell/
and i mean that literally/ the place where demon spirts dwell/
Nice WORDPLAY, No hits/PUNCHES

I'ma empty all the buck shot shells/ make your fuckin body smell/
keesy kee can fuck JKO up so who he was man they can not tell/
[b]Poor verse--Nursery RHYMES

fuckin wit me/ you fuckin wit the best/ and you also fuckin wit the wrong one/
AGAIN, ya have ta keep focused and throw some personals inta play dogg
i'll hit yo with the 9mm/ get a 9mm and blow out your lungs/
i'ma a fuckin thug and a got damn gangsta son/
This verse has the words and good use of multis

when you see me coming you better run for fucking cover boy... boom/
THis line is played--Ya have ta come original dogg

AK, SK, 4-4, tray A body kinda heavy/ and the D.O. A. is everywhere/
needs structure and better choice of words

so next time take notes/ before you end up cut throat/ JKO is on the ground broke/ with his fucking shirt soaked/
any minnie miny mo/ i'll blow this pussy out his clothes/
keesykee coming around wit the sawed off to lay down you hoes/
so if you think keesy kee aint a gangsta/
come and test the water/ you will be the slaughtered/ the dearly departured....... FUCK BOY
Bottom LINE---Ya need ta elevate, but your on the right track DOGG...Just keep battlN...Dont worry about a record cause ya will get good dogg
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yo this fuckin bitch wanted a rematch,i dont know y i guess he doesnt know hes gonna get bitch slap/
so so oppening

but i guess ill give him another chance,spit some good rap,not your usual crap/
NICE WORDPLAY and Multi usage..LOL

he thinks hes gonna win,guess a again,u would have a better chance doin a 360 spin/
Again nice wordplay and Multi

u would have a better chance,if u went on slim fast,and turned thin/
little weak

ill give ya another try,just promise me that yull actually rhyme,this time/
NICE/.....FUNNY SHIT..SHORT MULTI usage and straight to the poiny

and if u actually do,there gonna be worth dime,just like your life,your just plain out slime/
Not very good....Nursery rhyme

but its fine,u can go home and wine,on why,your whole lifes gonna die/
not very good...A LINE FILLER

for just comin on this rap site,geeze the weeze ooh my,you dont really have to cry,all the fuckin time/
i hope your change your stlye,and stop stealin lines rom 8 mile/
and dont try to lie,cause we all know your in the stage of denile/
you just need to leave,before you suffer and bleed/
cause u really need,to get hit by me,and come back to reality/
and now its done finally,and ill be happy to beat your ass again/
cause its really over,cause if u want to challenge,shit u probably just rap about u dont sin/
and how your a goody-good,and now you can add to your story that i just shot u in the hood/

BOTTOM LINE---NICE overall verse...needs some work in small areas, but ya clearly WON THIS battle....


VOTE JKO