Tik, your verse was powerful - it had emotions in it
it made me quite sad, content wise you may have edged
this battle.

Sureal, nice story - not as awe inspiring as Tik's but close.
flow was -average- i don't like the way you word things
but it was nice.

when i break it down...

Tik

Content 5/5
Flow 1/5*
Vocab 3/5
Imagery 4/5

Sureal

Content 4/5
Flow 4/5
Vocab 3.5
Imagery 4/5

Tik 13
Sureal 15


very nice battle. i was a little suprised.
but, Sureal takes this for one main
reason.

* Tik, your flow wasn't apparant at all
i know artists like sole don't rhyme
but...i couldn't find any rythm while
reading this, regardless of if it rhymes.


V. Sureal

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