Why must you guys do this to me, such great topicals. Tik, not like this matters, I liked your rhyme scheme, it was a little hard to find, but when I found it, it opened it up so much better. You kept where you were going with the story (as usual) in the dark until the very end. And I felt truly cheated out of an ending. I knew it was symbolic and all, and I am the definition of a romantic. Sureal, your ending was great, some parts were out of order, but I felt that you had the better Topical

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