wow..

this was pretty wack fellas. in fact..my god.

this is supposed to be constructive criticism but...sigh

ok, both of you require serious elevation. read some battle in the LLL...

ok Cenrtl- dont use the word "nigga" in your verse in makes you seem ignorant and takes away from the whole effect..ocus on metaphors and multies. i can tell thats what you are going for and itd probably suit you. also, lose the ~.

Trip. you seem to almost have the concept down but you lack flow and personals. you have to many fill in the blank punches..

on the whole i think Trip took this due to better understanding..

elevate fellas.