yo man this was a pretty tight verse

Flow: It flowed smoothly to me, nice man...8/10

Wordplay: Nice wordplay here, not to much but good amount...8/10

Concept: Very nice man, you stayed with it the whole way...9/10

Vocab: Nice vocab here...9/10

Overall: This was a tight verse man, keep it up...8.5/10

check my piece out "Mistakes"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68292