ok im going to break this battle down
1. I wasnt impressed with either verses.
they bot just sound like the same crap that every other herb throws up here but there has to be a winner so here we go
Twixisdabaddest1 : i wasnt feeling the whole football player locker thing i mean come on! you only have 10 lines you cant waist them with a situational filler.
"im tryna keep my cool but u steadly bein rude is u a dude /or bitch a trick or a snitch do u suck dick or do u lick the clit/"
i don't know what you were thinking with that but trust me, its been done to death. call a guy a fag but be original about it.
I wasnt feeling your style, word play or thug way of rap.
Traydiggz19: Nothing special but at least you had soem structure. Really basic flow but if you were going agaisnt this guy live judges would have seen you as more assertive and more direct. Your punches make gabby jay from mike tysons punch out look like herculeus. But you won this battle just because the other guy just doesnt have the minimal expierance to match you
vote: Traydiggz19
now vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8424#post658424
no offense or hate guys
just laying it down.
id expect you to do the same for me
peace