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Old 07-28-03, 05:51 AM   #12
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Rhythmic Came Better On This Track... More Multis Etc.

I Sensed A HUGE Overuse Of The Word "Yet" In The First Verse...

Flow - 8/10
Vocab - 7/10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Topic - 8/10

I Liked This Although I Believe Both Of You Can Do Better...

-Thanks For The Reply Rythmic
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