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Old 07-28-03, 03:14 PM   #18
Born To Kill
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Easy win I think by Krimzen...
Just better everything.
Flow, harder punches, wordplay, metas.

Blacksash...
Ya need ta change that format and use some complexity here and there.
Some of ya punches were good, but it was like ya were just saying them...without any rap at all...
And ya rhyme scheme needs work...
In one bar, ya rhymed lyric with itself...
Not much though there, dude.

Elevate

Winner: Krimzen

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