^ Shut the fuck up, idiot.

I personally thought this was dope, great writers voice and to me it seemed a spoken word type piece, i loved the beginning about the whole prisoner praying to god but he wouldnt answer, very nicely written my man, not too imageric, but awesome word usage to get out the emotional side, the short sentences built that up. Then as you moved on to the scientists / desciples, again - nicely portraid, story was told great, i liked how you moved further and furthur into the future, explaining what was happening at that time e.g humans now controlling the dolphins then the whole first son is sacvrificed, daughter is sold for sexual pleasure, other two children must work until death, that was dope. Great imagery, nicely told, ending was a little weird but it made for a nice read, i enjoyed it.

Belong in the poetry forum though, because its spoken word, but a hel;l of a nice piece my man.

Reply to mine. : )