aight check it...Blacksash...u had some ok rhymes...but ur structure is fucked...ur punches were pretty funny...lol...just fix up ur barz and clean up ur verses a lil' nah mean....it gives it a better flow....and Da Curse...u had more rhymes, wordplay, and punches than Black.....but ur punches didn't really connect hard...but they were better.....so i'ma have to go with Curse....

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peace
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