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Old 07-28-03, 09:54 PM   #11
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goddamn....shorten ur barz...lol...i'm havin to scroll left and right to read ur verse Kracka...ok....let's see....Kracka...u had some nice rhymes and attempted wordplay...which is still good....and some good punches....Slim....DON'T EVER USE PARAGRAPH FORM WHEN BATTLING....divide ur verse into barz....u will be hated on if u don't...and people won't take time to read ur shit....but....u still had some nice rhymes also....and some ok punches....keep it up though...nice try....but i gotta go with Kracka....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69234

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