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Old 07-28-03, 11:20 PM   #13
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yeah....this is pretty easy to choose from....but at least u'll get a ko Syn...lol....Rappa....try usin some wordplay...that helps with punches nah mean....u had some ok rhymes...but try to also rhyme a word more than once....looks more professional and use bigger words...nothing to really say about Syn...except ur barz were kinda jumbled in this battle messed up the flow a bit...other than that u had nice punches and wordplay....so i'ma go with syn on this shit

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