this was nice....rhymes were symplistic...then again...it's hard to use large vocabulary when doing an emotional song...i liked this shit....show's what u went through....and how u pulled through it...yeah....real emotional....

BREAKDOWN
Multis - good
Vocab - ok
Metas - good
Emotion - excellent
RhymeScheme - excellent
Flow - very good (except for Yamagasea...lol...couldn't pronounce)
Overall - u had some nice emotional shit goin on here....i think if u would'a put more time into it...it would've come out much better....

Rating
8.5/10

peace
4:20

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