The meaning of poetry when I read it tends to go over my head a lot. Or else I get it right on the spot. This peice went over my head.

What suprised me was that this was choppy like you said, but when I was whispering it as I read it, the peice had an amazing flow to it. Because it doesn't look like it could flow from one line to the next, but it manages to do so. That's what impressed me.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.