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Old 07-29-03, 03:00 AM   #13
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NICe battle both had a nice verse...

Conflict

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go ahead n bite 50, your style needs the change,
claim you flow swiftly, cuz ya lyrics run freely throughout my shooting range,
you sattle up cows to consider yourself riding heavy weight belts,
knock out your wealth, you won't be able to afford a 3rd loss dealt,
decapatate your brain, that way i'll insure you'll never be ahead of my game,


^ Nice way to open... Some punchlines right at the start..

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wonderin why he isn't mic'd out... i placed it up his ass n that's why his audio shit's still the same,
ridin coupes? it must be a mini cuz you like to relate your body aspects,
fuckin sluts? you stick it in but "perfekt...is it in yet?",
shit's hallarious ain't it, call me cedric the entertainer,
speakin your mind too much... truelly leaving yourself a no-brainer


^^ Ending was a little weak could have finished STRONGER...

Flow-7.5/10
Mults-6.5/10- Not many there..
Pucnline-7.5/10- LITTLE BUT SOME
Enjoy-3.5/5-


Perfekt

Quote:
I Scissor ~ your ~ brain n’ Chizzle ~ my ~ name but abstain ~ from ~ sayin ~ it
Cuz Perfekt ~ brings ~ pain with merkins ~ in ~ vain so you’d best ~ be ~ prayin ~ it
You’ve been deceived ~ to ~ beat those who achieve ~ tha ~ feats
U couldn’t take ~ the ~ heat, even when I gave ~ you ~ a ~ treat, n’ allowed ~ you ~ to ~ cheat
You bid too low, now you losin at the price ~ is ~ right
I gave ~ you ~ advice and yet you still succumb ~ to ~ the ~ fight
I aint a lawyer, so you don’t got wack insurance to reimburse


^ WOW MULTS LIKE NONE OTHER... dam playa nice opening...

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This nigga couldn’t catch a vote if he responded with a Cannabis battle verse
You’re out of tricks, like Harry Potter with out his magic stick
Im the Devil’s Advocate don’t give me a cold verse, cuz I ain’t havin it
You spit fast? Well I spit faster cuz I’m an ill rhyme master
This is an easy battle cuz I’m assualtin worse than the Kobe Bryant Disaster
Your “fire elementals” wouldn’t even set a blunt a blaze
I’ll leave you gazin ~ into ~ older ~ days when you weren’t in ~ a ~ wack ~phaze
In ~ many ~ ways, I murder you with a unique phrase … and yall said crime ~ don’t ~ pay


^^ NOW thats is how u end a fucking battle... with stright heat.. nice shit playa...

Flow-8.5/10
Mults-9.0/10- DAM
Puchlines-9.5/10- ALL OVER
Enjoy-4.5/5- WAS ILL

Overall this was a good battle but i got to give it to Perfekt, his verse was better and Pucnline hit harder..

Vote- Perfekt

Ya i now im a newbiee to this site but i have been on other sites... take the vote if u wont to...