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Old 07-29-03, 06:35 AM   #7
RythmicTendicies
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^nice Quote..lol^

Rhyming/Flow
The Flow Was Dope Dawg. It never Flawed ONce, You had Brutal INterline Rhyming n' Experimented To make Words Rhyme That Don't Normally -
9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Was Nice. Lines LIke: "Teased, Hassled, Knocked Out And Outcast To The Outskirts..."
n' "Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda, All Words That Have No Meaning...
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Showed Your Real Ability. You Had Killa Wordplay in Here, Don't See Many Catz Using This Is The Way You Did...9/10

Concept/Topic
Never Fell Off. I Personally Thought This Topic Was Dope, Not PLayed OUt Or Anything. You Constructed It into Your Own Style WHich Certainly Paid Off, "Just Another Face In teh Crowd" - This Realates To Nearly Everyone, Who At Some Time Or Another Have Felt This This - Tight...9/10

Overall
9/10, Wasn't Lacking anything really, ONly That Your Verse, Especially The First, Could Have Been Longer..I rarely Give 10's, lol...

Word!
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