Some real basic stuff here...

XL spit like he should have...
Kinda mild, but at least it brought meaning and punch.

Jack came with alot, a whole lot of filler and it really bogged down his rhyme.

Shorten up, make ya punches more effective by cutting to the chase...alot like boxing, your punches will land more effectively if they come straight forward.

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