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Old 07-29-03, 01:49 PM   #17
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PayableOnDeath-

-good rhyming intro and kinda soft punch
-good rhyming again but soft punches
-not that great closer... needs to punch harder

$$CrEaTe$$-

-okay intro... not a really hard diss though
-nice attempt at wordplay
-not great ending... need to punch harder too!!!

Vote: Create cuz his verse was more like a battle verse...