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Old 07-29-03, 02:54 PM   #10
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$BiDdY-CeNtRaL$ -

- good intro. nice punch and good flow
- 3rd and 4th lines were not that great! compare a rapper to a toy... thats soft!
- i dont believe in using the word 'nigga' on the internet...
- good personals
- pretty good closer... attempted to punch hard

Twixisdabaddest1 -

- bad intro.. momma jokes are not funny or good battle raps
- your structure is horrible... cant tell if thats 10 lines or 10 paragraphs
- bad rhyme scheme... needs work there
- weak personal disses...
- bad closer

Vote: Biddy... its obvious!