http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67848

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carsonjet-

- pretty good intro.. but you tried too hard on that multi
- okay follow up... but you rhymed slapped with slapped. be more creative

I cut-slash-dash-trash-an smoke ya like a bag'a seedless hash//

^^^ all hash is seedless man... lol. and that is not a good line... just cuz it rhymes dont make it hot.

- not that great of a closer... some of your shit i didnt understand! not bad though..

Dezyir-

- good opener... nice personal diss
- second bar tried to be a good personal diss... not bad
- good flow... nice attempts at good personals again. good work
- pretty good closer... you had good consistancy throughout the entire verse but all of your punches were just above soft.


Vote: Dezyir because he had more personal disses... and thats what battles are about. dissin. not flow