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Old 07-29-03, 02:32 PM   #15
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KrAcKa -

- nice opener... kinda sounded like an EM line though...
- line 2 was wack!!!
- line 3 was better...
- 4th line is getting better...
- line 6 had the only personal in the verse
- your lines seem kinda long...
- line 7 was good
- kinda week ending.

Slim_Lanky -

- your verse looks like a pile of horse shit. remember people have to read these and vote on them. making them hard to read really kicks yourself in the ass
- talking down on yourself in a diss battle is not gonna help you.
- week disses... soft like pillows
- need some work..

Vote: Kracka