http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67825

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LiL Lisa420 -

- you are talking about yourself too much... you need to diss your opponent!
- good personal diss in the middle...

ill spit first cuz you aynt got nuthin on me//
ill leave you cryin to ur opponents 'Lisa just fuckin smoked me'//

^^^ good line!

- bad ending!!! work on your skill, you aint bad.

Twix-

- twix dont pick on the weak... you are being like Merking King!!! rofl
- are you gonna call her a bitch in every line?!?! be mroe creative

trick go suck on a dick

^^^ comon man... be more creative

- trix your structure is not good! HIT THE ENTER KEY WHEN MAKING A NEW LINE!!!
- lines long...

Vote: Trix