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carsonjet -

- good intro. great multies and good personal disses

lines strecthed like aerobic spit labelled shit but who am i ta nit pik dis prick//
Im I.L.L your simply sick as in green from sailor dik's//
musta been a long trip-n-rip for all em white cap'd washin hiks//

^^^ nice lines! good multies and personals again! thats what battlin is about

- nice kordel stewart metaphor

Must be a 'crotch rocket' the way Im 'burnin Dis White Rice'//
Beat me? Betta odd's droppin 5 snake eye's~wit 10 dice~twice//

^^^ HOT HOT HOT!!!

- not bad closer... but not best line.

KrImZeN KiLLa -

- i dont agree with the use of 'nigga' on the internet...
- good rhyme in first line
- lol you rhymed about ninja turtles
- you are talking about your rhymes, your this and your that. you should put more emphasis on the dissing opponent
- I, I, I, I, thats all i see!!!

Bitch just retire your name and elevate your game..sign back on RB and try to put a newb to shame..//

^^^ best line

- not bad closer too!

Vote: carson. better verse.