http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67825
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J.K.O -
- first of all i think it is wack that you changed your verse twice... i am just gonna read the first one you posted.
- your opener is something that anyone can say... not very creative
- you rhymed wussy and pussy... comon man!!!
your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
its all good sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but i u dont stop till your real sick/
^^^ all that is filth... i dont know how you have 5 wins!!! no offense dogg you need to elevate and get those dick riders off ya
while u get on porn fuckin a duck/
^^^ did you really say fukkin a dukk?!!???!??! ROFL
KillahBebop_0024-
- good intro... great rhymes and decent personal
- nice follow up too! i like this verse so far!
- ROFL ROFL NICE LINE HERE!!!!
its so hot i got you sweatin like a "hooker in church"//
^^^ ROFL ROFL THAT WAS HARD!!!
we tied you up, put you in the trunk wit a gag in ya mouth//
and throw ya off a dam, and leave you to float down south//
^^^ nice hard punch... good work
- great vocab too... this was a GOOD GOOD battle verse
Vote: Killah