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Old 07-29-03, 03:02 PM   #14
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^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle!

J.K.O -

- first of all i think it is wack that you changed your verse twice... i am just gonna read the first one you posted.
- your opener is something that anyone can say... not very creative
- you rhymed wussy and pussy... comon man!!!

your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
its all good sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but i u dont stop till your real sick/

^^^ all that is filth... i dont know how you have 5 wins!!! no offense dogg you need to elevate and get those dick riders off ya

while u get on porn fuckin a duck/

^^^ did you really say fukkin a dukk?!!???!??! ROFL

KillahBebop_0024-

- good intro... great rhymes and decent personal
- nice follow up too! i like this verse so far!
- ROFL ROFL NICE LINE HERE!!!!

its so hot i got you sweatin like a "hooker in church"//

^^^ ROFL ROFL THAT WAS HARD!!!

we tied you up, put you in the trunk wit a gag in ya mouth//
and throw ya off a dam, and leave you to float down south//

^^^ nice hard punch... good work

- great vocab too... this was a GOOD GOOD battle verse

Vote: Killah