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Old 07-29-03, 08:12 PM   #7
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Yeah Premey was better with vocab wordplay and shit.... nice finisher too
Killa dont have so many quotations """""""" only use them 4 meda4s like your hands down line.. plus dont be so corny with your shit.. you have sick ideas jus need 2 be carryed out different.. like your finisher was way too corny.. BUT the idea was great.. plus ur bars are too long


and premey only use~this~ "~~" when you are interbar rhymin'
example
"Krimson you kiddin I have 2 cremate a middleweight when I just clicked~to~register/
U receive votes? maybe a demote, battlin' a newbie and gettin' murked, dat shit's~irregular/


both need more punches like your finisher premey

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