Easy merk by Krem...

Better wordplay, more effective punches.
Flow was there...

The other cat is definately just getting started.
Try and make every line a punch.
Ya setting up punches with the fist line of a bar then hitting with the second line is cool.
Reads nice.
But when ya opponent hits ya with every line that's he's pretty much doubled ya punch output.
I oughta know...
I loved setting up punches back in the day but I eventually learned to stop that and hit with every line.

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