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Old 07-30-03, 11:43 AM   #17
Genetikz
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i think this was an iight battle, carson was way down off his useal spittin self, carson u rapped ya verse wid bad grammer flow was their but grammer was terrible thus no flow, punches where thier but kinda not full on in ya face more like slaps,,, vocab was iight...

deskillz, i never read ya shit before but this is not bad, ya flow was ok in places but not all the way hence no flow, some of ya punches where full on and some where slaps,,,,,vocab was good in places and terrible in others,,,,,

in conclusion, carsen qiut the (bla bla) makes ya look like a noob if ppl dont get ya punches then fuck umm.

deskillz, u gotta get consistancy in ya shit na mean,,, if vocab n flow and punches where consistant carson woulda been dead by bar 4...
best lines....
CARSON jet u should be named,JAY JAY DA JET PLANE//
"I heard-that your-"wack" so I helped you "out" and
swerved-bats to curve-backs,
I'm so anxious to battle him, I opened a "Chinese restaurant" just to "serve-this-cat"/

overall
flow= neither
vocab= deskillz(just)
content= deskillz
punches= deskillz

vote= deskillz