Yo it was aight , but try not too have all dem quotation marks

My thoughts are "premeditated", im a street nigga plus "educated",im light but my problems are heavy "weighted",so im going back to the place i "originated",
^^^That was Sick as hell yo , it had sense , And it was onpoint , u had good use of wordplay in that sequence , Overall this Piece was short but nice , If it was longer , I would garantee u that it would be madd sick drop , and try not too type ur verse in paragraph form,..........Ur Concept too this was nice , u had good use of vocab..............Overall nice piece man........Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69472