Yeah, this was a freestyle alright. I dunno, you say you don't to that much poetry, so all i can say is i appreciate when people do this. But it seems to me like though you sat down and started typing off the top of your head ~Varento~

Your First Line Would Sound Better
Reworded But Its A Freestyle...Right?....

whisked away like worries in times of a
greater anticipation such as the time and hand
we made plans never to be kept
mutual respect set at the bare minumum

~Speaking As A Smart Individual..Well Appreciated And Real~

This Was A Decent Script Here..Please Be Respectful
And Reply To Those Who Have Shown Interest In Your Work.